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memories Feb 15, 2004 21:45:12 GMT -5

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Post by alwayshere on Feb 15, 2004 21:45:12 GMT -5

I have heard the crying in the night
and traced with fevered fingertips
the shadows on the walls.
I have felt the coldness of the floor
and laid my cheek against it
as I tried to stay alive.
I have searched for answers in my soul
and prayed to find a welcoming
in places yet unknown.
I have heard the crying in the night
and hoped for reassurance
that the weeping was not mine.

Chaotic_Thetis Apprentice Bleed me! For i have witnessed yet remained silent.Slay me! For i had your love and kept it. Posts: 142	memories Feb 16, 2004 4:56:26 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Chaotic_Thetis on Feb 16, 2004 4:56:26 GMT -5 That was brilliant, it left me with a haunting image. Wonderful piece here ^_^
	A woman who choses the writing profession often does so as to give herself a rank within a male-dominated society

amberputis Virtuoso ~Dreams are determined by our hearts, and our dreams design the future~ Posts: 330	memories Feb 16, 2004 11:06:30 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by amberputis on Feb 16, 2004 11:06:30 GMT -5 good job
	Amber

sweetest17sin Virtuoso don't frown! you never know who's falling in love with your smile! Posts: 252	memories Feb 16, 2004 16:27:45 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by sweetest17sin on Feb 16, 2004 16:27:45 GMT -5 i liked this poem a lot. nice job.
	somewhere there's someone who dreams of your smile and finds in your presence that life is worthwhile, so when you are lonely remember it's true; somebody, somewhere is thinking of you!

SilverEyes Poet Laureate Silver eyes crying crimson tears. Posts: 609	memories Feb 16, 2004 16:34:46 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by SilverEyes on Feb 16, 2004 16:34:46 GMT -5 Wow, that was a wonderful write. I especially love the last two lines.
	You know I'm dying to live Until I'm ready I'm ready to die ~Jonny Lang~

alwayshere Guest	memories Feb 17, 2004 14:43:34 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Back to Top Post by alwayshere on Feb 17, 2004 14:43:34 GMT -5 Thanks to all that replied makes more since to me knowing other people acutally understand what i am trying to say

Post by alwayshere on Feb 15, 2004 21:45:12 GMT -5

Post by Chaotic_Thetis on Feb 16, 2004 4:56:26 GMT -5

Post by amberputis on Feb 16, 2004 11:06:30 GMT -5

Post by sweetest17sin on Feb 16, 2004 16:27:45 GMT -5

Post by SilverEyes on Feb 16, 2004 16:34:46 GMT -5

Post by alwayshere on Feb 17, 2004 14:43:34 GMT -5