Eclipse
Apprentice
It's not a matter of luck, it's just a matter of time.
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Post by Eclipse on Feb 22, 2004 22:08:25 GMT -5
Dreamlike
Medicated sleep. Dreams floating into a barrage of unconsciousness. Yesterday’s colors Blend into the present. And the future is too far away. Thrashing into unrestlessness. The memories that I keep, Are all I have to stay, Somewhere beneath The moon’s sadistic crescent. Oh, floating aimlessly On my pearl horse of clouds. Spinning like a ballerina Above these faceless crowds. Falling in and out of this dream And what I perceive as reality. What I wish to be tangible And what morphs Into the abstract. Here, I reign, Atop my throne. Embroidered in the gold; Submerged into my pain. Yes here I reign, but I still reign alone. In the dark bottom of my sleep. Prisoner, In a misty castle of my dreams.
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Post by bloodredtears on Feb 24, 2004 1:05:14 GMT -5
wonderful piece here...i especially liked the last 3 lines...great job!
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Post by SilverEyes on Feb 26, 2004 19:48:10 GMT -5
I love your descriptions, especially, those of the moon and clouds. Wonderful write.
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sweetest17sin
Virtuoso
don't frown! you never know who's falling in love with your smile!
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Post by sweetest17sin on Feb 26, 2004 22:45:29 GMT -5
wow. that was amazing. beautifully written!
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Post by richie on Feb 28, 2004 5:04:46 GMT -5
I love poems on dreams most of all I think and have wrote six, your dream poem is excellent in style and content, Richie
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