DarkVortex
Novice
Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words." -Robert Frost
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Post by DarkVortex on May 22, 2005 18:55:04 GMT -5
Gazing on my minds island I recall. Awaken all the moments that made me fall. All bringing me down since I was a weak sound. Since I couldn't penetrate the thought which was found.
So linger I do, so while effortlessly draining. Filtering out all the corroded fear as if it were raining. All there faintly existed was the lights last shine. As I was reaching out for breathe but being confined.
It's like living a fairy tale without a joyous end. For thy to be banished and no single soul to defend. To help my sacrificed hope and insignificant self lie. Bringing my pride down and setting false hopes high.
It's sure that a saved picture will last for years. To help those moments of smiles, even the tears. But can it help the pain that I've lived through centuries. Where even a masquerade see the doused memories.
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Post by alostandbrokensoul on May 28, 2005 7:03:54 GMT -5
yay i love it!!
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DarkVortex
Novice
Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words." -Robert Frost
Posts: 36
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Post by DarkVortex on May 29, 2005 3:11:03 GMT -5
Thank you so much. I am so glad you have read my work and cherish it.. It means the world to me.. I have been posting on another forum called Poet's Cafe by Rainey Moon.. Then I found this so I will be here as well... Thanx again..~Nick
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Post by X x K e l Z x X on Jul 17, 2005 20:19:30 GMT -5
Great write
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