NeverMore
Virtuoso
Beethoven Looking f*g
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Post by NeverMore on Apr 14, 2004 12:49:16 GMT -5
I used to be a rock
til you
I used to be strong
till you
I used to smile
till you left
I used to breath
till you left
You used to smile
back once I recall
now you are cold
using words that freeze in the air
when did you learn to be so cold
who keeps the temperature turned so
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Post by ::..::FoX::..:: on Apr 16, 2004 14:57:16 GMT -5
I liked this one alot, probably because of the unique format, very good
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Post by bloodredtears on Apr 17, 2004 15:33:52 GMT -5
i really liked the last 3 lines of this piece alot...the whole thing was good, but those are my fav...wonderful job!
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