Journey II

Wolf
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In the end, we will remember not the words of our enemies, but the silence of our friends.

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Journey II Feb 21, 2004 1:12:07 GMT -5

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Post by Wolf on Feb 21, 2004 1:12:07 GMT -5

Journey II


 

Drifting in ebon night

lying at the final fringe

of the universe...

      Stars, galaxies, naught but dimly

      feebly glowing dust

      suspended so far away,

         so far, far away...



Here, are no stars

      to warm night eternal;

Here, are no planets

      to provide sunrise, sunset

      for eyes that seek beauty,

      for a soul hungering for love...

Here, is naught but void

      and the haunting winds

      blowing out of the cold, cold depths;

         the starless depths lying ahead...


                      © T. GhostWolf Davidson,  April 11, 1973

Not only the dead haunt the living

bloodredtears Legend I don't entirely think I've had enough rum to allow that kind of talk. Posts: 1,164	Journey II Feb 21, 2004 4:23:17 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by bloodredtears on Feb 21, 2004 4:23:17 GMT -5 a great sequel to the first part...wonderfully descriptive and lonely...great jobb!
	Poetry copyright of Bloodredtears Summer has flown its nest, as the days swiftly turn to fall and we start to roost in the bosom of winter.

SilverEyes Poet Laureate Silver eyes crying crimson tears. Posts: 609	Journey II Feb 21, 2004 21:21:00 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by SilverEyes on Feb 21, 2004 21:21:00 GMT -5 I agree, this is a wonderful sequel. To me, the last staza exemeplifies the lonliness and sadness of life.
	You know I'm dying to live Until I'm ready I'm ready to die ~Jonny Lang~

Post by Wolf on Feb 21, 2004 1:12:07 GMT -5

Post by bloodredtears on Feb 21, 2004 4:23:17 GMT -5

Post by SilverEyes on Feb 21, 2004 21:21:00 GMT -5