Wolf
Apprentice
In the end, we will remember not the words of our enemies, but the silence of our friends.
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Post by Wolf on Feb 20, 2004 18:20:51 GMT -5
Mists II
Grey wraiths mantling land and sea,
why do you cry? Your icy tears
are born by lonely winds to touch my heart...
--have you also
lost the warmth of summer,
the fragrance of spring?
Only your silent tears answer,
falling unseen by all, except me...
For I know of loss, I have felt sadness and sorrow,
and sought solace in the cold winds that gave you birth--
the winds that send your misty forms fleeing
over land and sea; no respite, no rest, forever...
Nebulous forms of grey-laced black,
know you of love lost? You have heard lonely gulls
crying, felt the surge of the timeless sea,
and heard the wind singing her melancholy song
in pine covered hills...
You have heard the mournful crying of coyotes in
vast deserts, touching them with your fleeting
shadows under uncaring steel stars and silver moon,
and you drift on, forever seeking, never finding--
Coming to mantle somber mountains in your grey shifting form,
crying alone in the eternal darkness with me...
© T. GhostWolf Davidson, September 27, 1972
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sweetest17sin
Virtuoso
don't frown! you never know who's falling in love with your smile!
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Post by sweetest17sin on Feb 21, 2004 1:21:08 GMT -5
wow, that was really good. you have really awesome imagery in your poems.
melissa!
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Post by bloodredtears on Feb 21, 2004 4:26:12 GMT -5
i totally agree...the imagery is, once again, amazing...i loved this line i love how i can hear the wind...music is a wonderful way to describe how something sounds because everyone can relate to it somehow...great job!
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Post by SilverEyes on Feb 21, 2004 21:13:05 GMT -5
It sounds like you're trying to cheer someone up or make a new friend and your questions are wonderfully worded. I like this very much.
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