Wolf
Apprentice
In the end, we will remember not the words of our enemies, but the silence of our friends.
Posts: 124
|
Doom
Feb 18, 2004 19:39:10 GMT -5
Post by Wolf on Feb 18, 2004 19:39:10 GMT -5
Doom
Walk on you poor and lonely man
Walk on until you die
No one will ever be your friend
No one will wonder why
You've walked the cold and empty world
You've heard the people's cries
You've seen the old and friendless too
and heard their empty sighs
Walk on beneath the cold night sky
beneath the cold star's gleam
Walk on until you curl and die
Forgotten all your dreams
You've seen men cruel to other men
and felt the pains of war
You've wondered why there is no love
and what our lives are for
Walk on with just the wind to care
to be your only friend
Walk on beneath the cold grey moon
Until you meet your end
Walk on you wise and lonely man
Walk on until you die
No one will ever be your friend
No one will wonder why
© T. GhostWolf Davidson, March 16th, 1968
|
|
|
|
Doom
Feb 19, 2004 10:31:05 GMT -5
Post by bloodredtears on Feb 19, 2004 10:31:05 GMT -5
another wonderfully written piece...your poetry is so wonderful to read...my favorite part of this has to be: great job!
|
|
sweetest17sin
Virtuoso
don't frown! you never know who's falling in love with your smile!
Posts: 252
|
Doom
Feb 19, 2004 22:42:36 GMT -5
Post by sweetest17sin on Feb 19, 2004 22:42:36 GMT -5
awesome job... my favorite part is
"You've seen men cruel to other men
and felt the pains of war
You've wondered why there is no love
and what our lives are for"
melissa!
|
|
|
|
Doom
Feb 21, 2004 20:20:56 GMT -5
Post by SilverEyes on Feb 21, 2004 20:20:56 GMT -5
I love the flow of this piece and diction. Nice write.
|
|
