Passing Moments

[Chaotic_Thetis]

"Morning"

"Evening"

"That's an unusual response.is that how you feel today?"

It's always evening in my world

"I like contradiction"

" Do you see yourself as a contradiction?"

Is that how You see Me?

"No"

"Is there a reason for you liking contradiction?"

A shake of the head

Talk to me. . .please

"Kindness. . .I hate it"

"Why's that? Did it take a turn on you?"

And spat right in my face

"When does it end?"

"In a while"

It's too long

"What else do you like?"

Where do I begin? The world is my playground yet it won't let me in to play.

"Writing"

"That's interesting. . .what do you write?"

~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~

"Isn't time up now?"

"Yes. . .I believe it is. . .tomorrow then?"

Is it optional?

"Tomorrow"

"By the way. . .I read your poem. . .tomorrow. . .why don't we talk?"

[amberputis]

this was exceptional, i was fully interested the whole time.

[SilverEyes]

Interesting write.

"I like contradiction."

I love that line.

[sweetest17sin]

that was really really good. i especially loved

"Where do I begin? The world is my playground yet it won't let me in to play."

too often this is so true.

[Chaotic_Thetis]

Thank you all for you kind words, glad it turned out reasonably well ^_^

[Eclipse]

interesting write. i like the conversation going on. it's really cool.

[richie]

Hi Chaotic thetis,
loved it, just what good performance poetry is all about it sounds great.
take care Richie.