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Fall
Feb 13, 2004 18:33:53 GMT -5
Post by Tempest on Feb 13, 2004 18:33:53 GMT -5
Fall
Fall Trip over the edge Into oblivion. Never touch solid ground again.
Fall Release everything Into waterfalls of red; Relief from the treasured blade.
Fall Find ecstasy In the pain. Hide in its overwhelming presence.
Fall Sanctify yourself With your blood. Let it purify your lost and sinful soul.
Fall Let the scars Be reminders; Souvenirs of a great battle fought inside.
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Fall
Feb 13, 2004 23:59:00 GMT -5
Post by SilverEyes on Feb 13, 2004 23:59:00 GMT -5
Wow, I love the flow of this. This has to be one of my favorite poems on the site.
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Fall
Feb 14, 2004 14:45:14 GMT -5
Post by bloodredtears on Feb 14, 2004 14:45:14 GMT -5
this is a great piece...i really enjoyed it...the imagery of the second stanza is wonderful!
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sweetest17sin
Virtuoso
don't frown! you never know who's falling in love with your smile!
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Fall
Feb 15, 2004 21:04:57 GMT -5
Post by sweetest17sin on Feb 15, 2004 21:04:57 GMT -5
i agree w/ silvereyes...great job!
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