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Post by SilverEyes on Feb 13, 2004 2:08:29 GMT -5
Long-stemmed
With velvety petals
They're
Carnations sold
For Valentine's Day
It's practically tradition
All the other girls
Got
One and Two
Three and Four
But me
I got none
And all I wanted
Was a single one
1:01 AM
February 13, 2004
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Post by leash on Feb 13, 2004 14:32:52 GMT -5
aww.. that really sucks.  you just wait till youre out of highschool.. things will be different  well done, silver eyes. very sad. |
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Post by bloodredtears on Feb 13, 2004 15:46:58 GMT -5
very good piece...(petals not perals right?) and i agree that highschool sux, but it hasn't changed anything for me in the valentine's day department...still no bf and still not flowers but your chances of finding a special someone are better!!! great piece you've written..very real |
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amberputis
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Post by amberputis on Feb 14, 2004 17:54:30 GMT -5
this is sad, but im in the same position..in high school, heart-broken, wanting maybe one single bit of hope.(1 single carnation) Some day people like you and me and who ever else will receive our single carnation, rose, or whatever it may be that we desire. I haven't a doubt in my mind, although I know it hurts for the time being.
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Post by Sathien on Feb 15, 2004 11:06:24 GMT -5
aw, but dear, remember this - you are worth more than those carnations and valentine's day and traditions.
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sweetest17sin
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don't frown! you never know who's falling in love with your smile!
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Post by sweetest17sin on Feb 15, 2004 21:03:59 GMT -5
so so SO true! and i worked in a floral on valentines good job! |
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