sweetest17sin
Virtuoso
don't frown! you never know who's falling in love with your smile!
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Post by sweetest17sin on Feb 12, 2004 1:29:50 GMT -5
i can't take this anymore i can't go on living this way the wall that holds my strength is falling more everyday
all i do at night is cry and no one seems to care dont be surprised to wake up one day and find that i'm not there
i'm so full of pain all i wanna do is die i think that's what i'm gonna do and in case you're wondering, here's why:
it's hard to keep on living when there's nothing to live for and all you ever see in your face is a slamming door
your parents, the ones who are supposed to care the most of all really, truly don't they don't pick you up when you fall
the friends that you once ran to now seem to run away what are you supposed to do when you're all alone in this place
the one you thought you'd always be with who'd be forever by your side left you at your lowest point left you all alone in life
so now it's time to go it's my time to say good-bye know that i'm in a better place and i'll no longer have to cry
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Post by bloodredtears on Feb 12, 2004 2:52:08 GMT -5
good job! i enjoyed it immensly
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Post by SilverEyes on Feb 13, 2004 16:07:07 GMT -5
Great ending and a great write too.
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amberputis
Virtuoso
~Dreams are determined by our hearts, and our dreams design the future~
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Post by amberputis on Feb 14, 2004 17:47:32 GMT -5
I know this feeling too well, I couldn't help but love this poem, great job.
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