cant take the pain

[sweetest17sin]

i dont feel like this anymore, but i just thought i would still post it incase there are people who do. i know when i was depressed it helped to read things that were relatable. if you are depressed, and do need someone to talk to, don't hesitate to get a hold of me!

im sorry but i cant be here
i cant take this pain one more day
life is sendin me a messange
saying "go, be on your way
you're no longer welcome
your time here on Earth is done
hope you enjoyed your stay
hope you had your fun
there's a new place awaiting for you
you'll be welcomed w/ open arms
and in this place you'll be protected
protected from all harm"
so all that i loved
all those important to me
know i'll take you w/ me
and that it's not my choice to leave
i wont forget our memories
the wonderful times we shared
and please don't think that cuz im leaving
that i don't care
i love everyone of you
you all know who you are
if you ever need me
i won't be that far
just reach into your heart
look up into the sky
talk to me if you need to
and tell me whats on your mind
everyone has a time to go
and i guess that mine is now
i'll meet you up in heaven
but for now i'll be looking down

[bloodredtears]

good piece...the rhymes scheme was good and i really like the message in it...great job!

[SilverEyes]

A sad but beautiful message.