Tears on the sand

Tania
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Tears on the sand Feb 8, 2004 1:07:50 GMT -5

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Post by Tania on Feb 8, 2004 1:07:50 GMT -5

Tears on the sand
Pain and blood
Mingle like pebbles
My heart in your hand
And the rough edge of life
Is softer in your dreams
Because you're not the one that
is hurting
It is me
Tears on the sand
Diamonds for a heart
Never love a man
Emotions rip one apart
And my self-confidence is down
My heart alseep
I fall for you, a clown
From this abyss I creep
Tania Walsh

SilverEyes Poet Laureate Silver eyes crying crimson tears. Posts: 609	Tears on the sand Feb 8, 2004 1:30:24 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by SilverEyes on Feb 8, 2004 1:30:24 GMT -5 Tania said: Tears on the sand Pain and blood Mingle like pebbles My heart in your hand God that's beautiful...in the tragic sense of course.
	You know I'm dying to live Until I'm ready I'm ready to die ~Jonny Lang~

Tania Novice Posts: 49	Tears on the sand Feb 8, 2004 1:34:56 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Tania on Feb 8, 2004 1:34:56 GMT -5 Thank you very much for your kind comments on my poem. Tania

bloodredtears Legend I don't entirely think I've had enough rum to allow that kind of talk. Posts: 1,164	Tears on the sand Feb 8, 2004 16:48:53 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by bloodredtears on Feb 8, 2004 16:48:53 GMT -5 that was my favorite part of the poem...the one silver eyes quoted...this had a tragically beautiful feel to it...great job!
	Poetry copyright of Bloodredtears Summer has flown its nest, as the days swiftly turn to fall and we start to roost in the bosom of winter.

Post by Tania on Feb 8, 2004 1:07:50 GMT -5

Post by SilverEyes on Feb 8, 2004 1:30:24 GMT -5

Post by Tania on Feb 8, 2004 1:34:56 GMT -5

Post by bloodredtears on Feb 8, 2004 16:48:53 GMT -5