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I don't entirely think I've had enough rum to allow that kind of talk.

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Post by bloodredtears on Feb 2, 2004 16:58:57 GMT -5

Process
1/22/04

nothing can reverse
the process already begun
nothing can stop me
from picking up that gun
nothing can stop
my finger from squeezing tight
nothing can stop
what will happen tonight
As I pull back the trigger
I smile one last time
my foot is tapping rhythm
my laugher is a rhyme.
One round, or two
shot into my mind
a body, my remains,
is all you will find
My life will fly me
and escape all its pain
maybe thinking I'm better off
with help you sustain
no longer having to feel
I lay down to die
I don't quite understand
but my soul had begun to cry,
as my body hits the floor.

Last Edit: Feb 4, 2004 19:20:42 GMT -5 by bloodredtears

** Poetry copyright of Bloodredtears

**Summer has flown its nest, as the days swiftly turn to fall and we start to roost in the bosom of winter.

SilverEyes Poet Laureate Silver eyes crying crimson tears. Posts: 609	Process Feb 2, 2004 22:21:58 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by SilverEyes on Feb 2, 2004 22:21:58 GMT -5 Quite a dark piece and the imagery is morbidly alluring. I just couldn't stop reading. The last three lines show me both religious themes and the depth of your depression.
	You know I'm dying to live Until I'm ready I'm ready to die ~Jonny Lang~

richie Virtuoso Posts: 302	Process Feb 4, 2004 14:14:32 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by richie on Feb 4, 2004 14:14:32 GMT -5 excellent poem you have kept the rhyme in such a dark poem, a poem to make the reader think which is good. regards richie.
	from childhood's hour I have not been as others were-I have not seen as others saw-I could not bring my passions from a common spring from the same sourse I have not taken my sorrow: I could not awaken my heart to joy at the same tone and all I loved I loved alone.

amberputis Virtuoso ~Dreams are determined by our hearts, and our dreams design the future~ Posts: 330	Process Feb 4, 2004 20:55:26 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by amberputis on Feb 4, 2004 20:55:26 GMT -5 that was good, very intense, kept me interested!
	Amber

Tania Novice Posts: 49	Process Feb 5, 2004 17:47:32 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Tania on Feb 5, 2004 17:47:32 GMT -5 I thought this poem was dark and thought provoking and simply beautiful. Tania

John Barnett Founders Founder Posts: 994	Process Feb 5, 2004 17:50:43 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by John Barnett on Feb 5, 2004 17:50:43 GMT -5 A dark thinker piece, great job Kris!
	Jwalaeb

bloodredtears Legend I don't entirely think I've had enough rum to allow that kind of talk. Posts: 1,164	Process Feb 5, 2004 19:55:56 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by bloodredtears on Feb 5, 2004 19:55:56 GMT -5 thanks for the comments everyone...
	Poetry copyright of Bloodredtears Summer has flown its nest, as the days swiftly turn to fall and we start to roost in the bosom of winter.

Tania Novice Posts: 49	Process Feb 8, 2004 1:11:48 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Tania on Feb 8, 2004 1:11:48 GMT -5 This is a dark and beautiful song of suicide. I just thought it was beautiful. Tania

sweetest17sin Virtuoso don't frown! you never know who's falling in love with your smile! Posts: 252	Process Feb 15, 2004 21:10:50 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by sweetest17sin on Feb 15, 2004 21:10:50 GMT -5 wow...
	somewhere there's someone who dreams of your smile and finds in your presence that life is worthwhile, so when you are lonely remember it's true; somebody, somewhere is thinking of you!

bloodredtears Legend I don't entirely think I've had enough rum to allow that kind of talk. Posts: 1,164	Process Apr 19, 2004 3:02:19 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by bloodredtears on Apr 19, 2004 3:02:19 GMT -5 glad you liked it tania and thanks for the wow!
	Poetry copyright of Bloodredtears Summer has flown its nest, as the days swiftly turn to fall and we start to roost in the bosom of winter.

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Post by SilverEyes on Feb 2, 2004 22:21:58 GMT -5

Post by richie on Feb 4, 2004 14:14:32 GMT -5

Post by amberputis on Feb 4, 2004 20:55:26 GMT -5

Post by Tania on Feb 5, 2004 17:47:32 GMT -5

Post by John Barnett on Feb 5, 2004 17:50:43 GMT -5

Post by bloodredtears on Feb 5, 2004 19:55:56 GMT -5

Post by Tania on Feb 8, 2004 1:11:48 GMT -5

Post by sweetest17sin on Feb 15, 2004 21:10:50 GMT -5

Post by bloodredtears on Apr 19, 2004 3:02:19 GMT -5