Death

[bloodredtears]

Death
1/22/04

I want to die
I want to hang myself
until my breath is gone
I want to watch my blood
drip slowly to the floor
I want to hear my screams
echo off the walls
I wat to see the blacknes
as my body gives up
I want to feel the emptyness
that is left over.
I need to die
I need to get rid
of this hate inside
I need to cause pain
so I can rid myself of it
I need to lose myself
in the dripping blood
pooling at my feet
I want to die
I need to die

[serenepoetress]

A very vivid expression of self-loathing and the desire to have it all end...well conveyed but hopefully not something you are intent on doing...very intense

[SilverEyes]

Yes, hopefully something you don't intend to go through with. This a powerful piece just saturated with the need to escape the pain of life and with strong imagery as well.

[Leah]

Death is something hard to take in. I had a real good friend that hung himself in the dorm closet. Two days passed, heard nothing from him. Home for the holidays, nothing heard from him. Called his house, parents weren't concerned. He hung himself the day we left. That was the worse thing to experience. I spoke to him just few minutes before he did it. That is something that I will never forget. Never seen it coming. So hard to face. His family couldn't look me in the face. We had been best friends in school, then went to college. Never a sign of nothing. Til the letter was read that was wrote to me, and why...
Even tho you know one so well. Sometimes things don't surface til to late. Or something can surface from within if a traggic happens. I know.
So deep and very tense. I feel the words being spoke, as being redone again. Pain can be so strong that it can be scarey at times.....