The Real World??

[Reality]

The Real World??

I feel like crawling into a dark hole
A place to get away from this world
Sometimes it just feels like I have no where to go
From the stress that eats me up inside
Deep inside my soul feels like crying,asking are you going to let me die?

Everything crashing all around
Beaten to the ground, money all around
I can’t stand this sound
Someone rescue me from these horrific sounds
Help me fight, and don’t let me be knocked down
Someone come to my rescue and save me

Someone come and show me the way
Out of this place, they call the real world
Take me away even just for one day
And let me know everything will be ok
Give me the confidence that everything will come together
and finally set me free from the pain
of this everyday world


© Andy Stewart

[T.J. Barber]

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[bloodredtears]

this is a very good piece...i can totally understand the feeling..i like the second stanza esp the last two lines of it...because everyone wants to be rescued and it shows you're not afraid to ask for help great job

[SilverEyes]

A very powerful write and one that I felt very close to home.

[John Barnett]

This is a great write Andy, welcome to Poet Club. Correct me if I am wrong, but you signed my guestbook on my personal page. Thanks, and keep up the good work!

John

[Tania]

I really like this poem as it describes the harshness of the everyday. The chronic beating down of one's emotional defences by the onslaught of everyday life.
It is very true to life.
I think it is a very good poem.
Tania

[X x K e l Z x X]

Great job Andy, this was very good.