Tsunami

bloodredtears
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I don't entirely think I've had enough rum to allow that kind of talk.

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Tsunami Jan 28, 2004 20:32:12 GMT -5

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Post by bloodredtears on Jan 28, 2004 20:32:12 GMT -5

Tsunami
1/22/04

Churning,
angry,
confused,
exhausted.
Feeling as if I've
let down once more.
I can never
get it right.
I think my birth
was a big mistake.
I can't help
hurting others.
I can't stop
spreading my pain
to everyone I see.
Even people I respect
get the raw end
of MY deal.
My imperfections
become fuel
and cause a
wildfire to errupt.
I clear a path
20 miles around me.
I'm untouchable,
no longer caring
who goes down
in the wake
of my
tsunami

Last Edit: Jan 29, 2004 0:59:35 GMT -5 by bloodredtears

** Poetry copyright of Bloodredtears

**Summer has flown its nest, as the days swiftly turn to fall and we start to roost in the bosom of winter.

SilverEyes Poet Laureate Silver eyes crying crimson tears. Posts: 609	Tsunami Jan 28, 2004 21:47:39 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by SilverEyes on Jan 28, 2004 21:47:39 GMT -5 Sometimes, my rage can be like that too. Nice write, you just mispelled fuel in the 20th line.
	You know I'm dying to live Until I'm ready I'm ready to die ~Jonny Lang~

bloodredtears Legend I don't entirely think I've had enough rum to allow that kind of talk. Posts: 1,164	Tsunami Jan 29, 2004 0:59:15 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by bloodredtears on Jan 29, 2004 0:59:15 GMT -5 thanks i was typing to fast...
	Poetry copyright of Bloodredtears Summer has flown its nest, as the days swiftly turn to fall and we start to roost in the bosom of winter.

Post by bloodredtears on Jan 28, 2004 20:32:12 GMT -5

Post by SilverEyes on Jan 28, 2004 21:47:39 GMT -5

Post by bloodredtears on Jan 29, 2004 0:59:15 GMT -5