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Post by butterfly on Sept 12, 2005 5:58:15 GMT -5
Being out in the cold Is interesting… This emotional chill Is becoming very Boring And immature This heart Is not hurt With indifferent arrows Of shallow friends Arctic weather clears And messages are received In a clear form Yes….subtle, sharp Words Can pierce A vulnerable armour Sorry girls…. I’m suited with Indifference… Cold Anger And dash of Veagance.
Butterfly
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NeverMore
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Post by NeverMore on Sept 25, 2005 10:02:40 GMT -5
After reading this a few times, I understand it as I see it. I almost feel like I am inside this work, feeling what it says. I have been emotionally dead for a while, but I seem to have come out of it feeling vulnerable, yet ready to try again, but not. If that makes sense.. nice job here! Joe
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Post by alostandbrokensoul on Oct 3, 2005 12:03:00 GMT -5
again your poetry draws me in and i am falling in love with it it was beautiful and i love it!! thank you for letting me read it, i hope to read more
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