Struggling

[DeadlySilence]

We're drifting apart again...
I want to save "us,"
But I don't think I can...
Is it wrong for me to be crying?
My hand is outstretched to you,
But I don't see you reaching back.
Do you still need me,
Cuz I don't think I can let go?
You hold my heart an love
In the palm of your hand.
I don't want it back from you,
But I can't go on without it.
I'm looking for your hand,
And wondering,
Why aren't you reaching back?
I'm struggling to hold on...
You're pushing me away so hard,
I don't know why
And I don't want to understand,
But I do wonder...
Where are you?

03-?-2004

[::..::FoX::..::]

That is also sad and touching, good job

[DeadlySilence]

Thank you, Fox!

[bloodredtears]

another wonderful piece

My hand is outstretched to you,
But I don't see you reaching back

this is my favorite part of the entire piece..reminds me of a piece i've written...great job!

[DeadlySilence]

Thank you!