The Blade of Life and Death

[poeticmuse]

I take this blade of Life and Death
Sharpened to perfection
Turning the shining exterior to you
So you may see your true reflection

The reflection of what’s inside of you
For your Judge to see
What you tried to hide from all
Yet it couldn’t escape me

The lies you told to those you “loved”
The past you refused to admit
The scars they bear because of you
And your alcoholic fits

This blade of Life and Death
Reflects all this to you
No last words before you die
Before you’ll see the truth

The truth you persistently denied
Not admitting your big fault
Locked away inside your mind
Locked inside your soul’s vault

Your final day has arrived
You know you cannot hide
Because of you, those innocent
Minds and souls have died

[::..::FoX::..::]

Wow, this has a bang to it, very striking.

[John Barnett]

This is indeed very good, I really like the title and the topic.

[rinna(on leave...for eternity)]

i can't highlight anything here because i liked it all. well done, write on!