NeverMore
Virtuoso
Beethoven Looking f*g
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No Name
Nov 23, 2004 21:47:21 GMT -5
Post by NeverMore on Nov 23, 2004 21:47:21 GMT -5
I gave you my world all the time the patience and caring you never had
I gave you the time where none would even try opened doors that felt so heavy showed people who you could really be
The time invested to show just that someone really cared to help you understand you truely were worth the time
now here I sit wiping the spit from my face not understanding just why you took and you took only to throw your hate in my face for reasons that could not be understood
you rip the soul from this chest dancing on it with glee not caring who can see
time will give back to you all the pleasure you desrve but the pain you left behind will still kill me slowly
the only importance to you is hiding in yourself not caring who you destroy
understand this old friend you won more then you know you ended a caring soul you killed what so many loved
you destroyed what truely was a friend who gave it all
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No Name
Nov 25, 2004 5:38:49 GMT -5
Post by rinna(on leave...for eternity) on Nov 25, 2004 5:38:49 GMT -5
dear me, nevermore!
you have such a selfless love to give, and to see the written word of hurt, the hurt that you feel...arg!
i have never met you, and i probably never will. but if i could give you a hug, it'd be about now. i hope you're keeping well.
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No Name
Nov 26, 2004 17:37:15 GMT -5
Post by beginswithKendsinG on Nov 26, 2004 17:37:15 GMT -5
Yeah the feeling of being so angry that you just don't care anymore. Broken. Good write mate.
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No Name
Nov 29, 2004 7:04:29 GMT -5
Post by X x K e l Z x X on Nov 29, 2004 7:04:29 GMT -5
Awesome work
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poeticmuse
Novice
Here I come to save the day!
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No Name
Dec 6, 2004 19:40:51 GMT -5
Post by poeticmuse on Dec 6, 2004 19:40:51 GMT -5
I can feel the anger and pain from this. You put into words what many of us feel when taken advantage of by selfish people. A very good write
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