Wickedblades666
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I Hate Life, but i am stuck in it by my own rules: death is for quitters, i dont quit...
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Post by Wickedblades666 on Nov 8, 2004 13:32:50 GMT -5
This is a poem by my friend...i felt it was a great poem so i would like to share it with everyone...
Parents walk into their young childs room unaware of the impending doom they see him sitting there with a cold blank stare in his coat you never found, his final note all you saw was the blade in his hand and his arm bloodied on the nightstand the screams of horror filled the hall but you were to blame for it all you would always scream and always yell and the day you smacked him when he said go to hell! he went into his room and started to cry he broke down to his friends, and wished you would die he pulled through that day but you never said sorry untill that faithful day you wonder where did it go wrong but you never thought maybe i was to blame, maybe i was wrong you always criticize the way he looks and even the way he speaks you always yelled you look like a f*cking freak you hated all his friends you still do, blaming they forced it to an end you blamed ther for all his ways even thought they were there during his darkest days if you would have found his not you would have read his reason to bring it all to a halt you would have known ITS ALL YOUR FUALT!!!
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Post by beginswithKendsinG on Nov 9, 2004 6:48:33 GMT -5
AHA! Parental responsibility. Don't get me started. You listen to MM?
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Post by T.J. Barber on Nov 9, 2004 10:17:10 GMT -5
WOW!
Therapy is my keyword for today....
I really enjoyed this very high tone, blood pulsing, piece that really intrigued and disturbed me on some levels. I found it violent and moody as it should be to fit in this category. I really enjoyed it very much...tell your friend that this piece is a true emotional work of true art....
TJ
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Post by beginswithKendsinG on Nov 10, 2004 22:48:36 GMT -5
lol, yeah it was prety good too
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Wickedblades666
Apprentice
I Hate Life, but i am stuck in it by my own rules: death is for quitters, i dont quit...
Posts: 97
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Post by Wickedblades666 on Nov 11, 2004 0:38:42 GMT -5
yah...my friend has some issues to work out...but he can definetly write...and yes i believe he does...i have heard some of his songs...i am more a tool person, nice song, mostly guitar, and outrageous lyrics...
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Post by rinna(on leave...for eternity) on Nov 18, 2004 7:45:10 GMT -5
...and it's amazing to see fury transcend the physical into a written unleashing... your friend did a great job.
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