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Post by DeadlySilence on Apr 10, 2004 19:40:05 GMT -5
You know, I’m here for you, right? I want so much to believe you, But I’m struggling, Cuz I’ve heard this all before. I can’t believe the lies And I can’t believe your promises.
You know, I love you, right? Deep down I want to believe you, But I’m struggling, Cuz I’ve heard this all before. I can’t believe the lies And I can’t believe your promises.
3-10-2004
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Post by ::..::FoX::..:: on Apr 16, 2004 14:55:05 GMT -5
That's great CJ, very well written and heartwrenching
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Post by DeadlySilence on Apr 16, 2004 15:11:23 GMT -5
Thank you, Fox.
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Post by bloodredtears on Apr 17, 2004 15:36:10 GMT -5
a good piece...the repetition of the last half gets the point driven very well...i like that! good job!
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Post by DeadlySilence on Apr 17, 2004 19:26:40 GMT -5
Thank you.
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