Seth
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Posts: 411
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Post by Seth on Jul 19, 2004 11:22:18 GMT -5
Anger is the word Is all I see Anger will become you Anger will destroy me.
We all think we know, Believe rumors over truth Falling like morons- Sure examples of idiotic youth.
All the secrets you swore to keep Now gossip for the school Everything you once were Reduced to a cheating fool.
Anger is my new best friend No longer is it you I hate you and so you know Every word I say is true.
Feelings of betrayal are etched inside Each of us dying in Anger's red hue The pain will destroy me As bitterness consumes you.
With each insult and trick we play and every secret that we tell The flames burn brighter Down in Hell.
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Post by rinna(on leave...for eternity) on Jul 21, 2004 5:42:12 GMT -5
well done, seth. i like this very much. x r x
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Post by Mikepoet on Jul 22, 2004 20:12:52 GMT -5
Ahh Seth, you are a gtreat poet in the making. One thing which is at times unpleasent about a good poet is others may enjoy the deep feelings in the poems but the poet felt the pain and unhappiness we rhyme of. Again I say you are a natural born poet.
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Post by ::..::FoX::..:: on Oct 19, 2004 16:52:34 GMT -5
Emotion packed for sure, very nice Seth.
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