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shebangs17
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Tell Me May 19, 2004 17:18:38 GMT -5

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Post by shebangs17 on May 19, 2004 17:18:38 GMT -5

Why are you angry at me?
What could I have done?
I think all day about it, but nothing comes to mind.
Have I said something stupid,
or done something I shouldn't've?
I wish you would tell me.
Are you even angry at me?
Is there something else clouding your mind?
But yet you ignore me, I want to know why.
I am ready to listen, ready to hear.
The reasons you have, and seem to hold dear.

bloodredtears Legend I don't entirely think I've had enough rum to allow that kind of talk. Posts: 1,164	Tell Me May 19, 2004 23:39:02 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by bloodredtears on May 19, 2004 23:39:02 GMT -5 good piece...some of the punctuation threw me off a little bit, but other than that the message and style was really good!
	Poetry copyright of Bloodredtears Summer has flown its nest, as the days swiftly turn to fall and we start to roost in the bosom of winter.

rinna(on leave...for eternity) Poet Laureate MIA Quitter surfninja Posts: 610	Tell Me May 21, 2004 5:59:32 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by rinna(on leave...for eternity) on May 21, 2004 5:59:32 GMT -5 agree with kris here on the flow, but overall nicely done. x rinna x
	'this life, well it's slipping right through my hands...these days turned out nothing like i had planned...'

Mikepoet Virtuoso Posts: 487	Tell Me Jul 22, 2004 20:06:56 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Mikepoet on Jul 22, 2004 20:06:56 GMT -5 I know the feeling and felt the pain of wondering what I've done wrong. "Sigh"

Post by shebangs17 on May 19, 2004 17:18:38 GMT -5

Post by bloodredtears on May 19, 2004 23:39:02 GMT -5

Post by rinna(on leave...for eternity) on May 21, 2004 5:59:32 GMT -5

Post by Mikepoet on Jul 22, 2004 20:06:56 GMT -5