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Post by Alex'z Death Chic on Apr 5, 2004 7:06:42 GMT -5
The room is filled with silence Now that we’re stuck in this war of pride Daring the other to lose this fight Not caring of what emotions we destroy inside
I’ve tried to utter words to you And end this foolish quarrel But my pride won’t allow me I guess I’ll just leave it to time to tell
You said you’ll drive me insane And speak no words to me For a whole excruciating week And I must admit, I’m going crazy
It’s almost like I’m ready to burst With this insanity in me that only seems to grow I want to talk to you, but again, my pride’s in the way But of course, that’s something that you already know
You fight the urge to open your mouth as well Because you want me to be the first to speak But then I just defy you with my eyes Trying to prove to you that I’m not that weak
So if you’re not willing to say the first words And I’m sure not willing to compromise Because whatever taunting you do I’ll just defy you with my eyes
So then I ask of you will our love end this way? Will my world again be void of your existence? Will my name be erased in your heart? Will our love end in silence?
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Post by bloodredtears on Apr 5, 2004 11:27:54 GMT -5
wow...very good piece...wonderfully written...i love how you show how hard it is to give in when you have opposing beliefs and how communication is a big key in a successful relationship...good job!
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Post by ::..::FoX::..:: on Apr 16, 2004 14:55:31 GMT -5
Communication is the key to success in anything, great write and very true.
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