Hearts can crack

Tania
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Hearts can crack Jan 22, 2004 1:34:59 GMT -5

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Post by Tania on Jan 22, 2004 1:34:59 GMT -5

Hearts can crack
Under the pressure
Of emotion
Hurt, Anger and Less
Attractive Emotions
Can Surface
Leaving the Vunerability
Bare
And Bleeding
Tears of Obscurity
Bruises on Egos
Giving birth to Issues
Of Vague and Sad
Paternity
Cracked from Battles
Left Forgotten
Buried deep within
Festering and Rotten
Solidified in Indifference
As emotion is Parched
And Purged
And Forgotten
Tania

bloodredtears Legend I don't entirely think I've had enough rum to allow that kind of talk. Posts: 1,164	Hearts can crack Jan 22, 2004 8:56:21 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by bloodredtears on Jan 22, 2004 8:56:21 GMT -5 i really enjoyed this piece..very good job!
	Poetry copyright of Bloodredtears Summer has flown its nest, as the days swiftly turn to fall and we start to roost in the bosom of winter.

serenepoetress Apprentice Posts: 84	Hearts can crack Jan 22, 2004 15:39:46 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by serenepoetress on Jan 22, 2004 15:39:46 GMT -5 So true and insightful...this piece really hit home...thank goodness for husband #2...truly a remarkable piece...
	Copyright 2004 Laura Mae Oldham-Brownell

SilverEyes Poet Laureate Silver eyes crying crimson tears. Posts: 609	Hearts can crack Jan 22, 2004 17:34:28 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by SilverEyes on Jan 22, 2004 17:34:28 GMT -5 "Attractive Emotions Can Surface Leaving the Vunerability Bare And Bleeding" I love those lines.
	You know I'm dying to live Until I'm ready I'm ready to die ~Jonny Lang~

Sathien Guest	Hearts can crack Jan 24, 2004 14:13:50 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Back to Top Post by Sathien on Jan 24, 2004 14:13:50 GMT -5 beautiful flow of words. sinks deep. keep up!

T.J. Barber Administrator Founder I would advise you to stay on my good side!!! Posts: 937	Hearts can crack Feb 3, 2004 11:38:03 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by T.J. Barber on Feb 3, 2004 11:38:03 GMT -5 Your words stain my soul. This was an awesome flow of emotion. I enjoyed every second of it. Your emotions filled the room as I read this one. Great job
	Last Edit: Feb 3, 2004 11:38:33 GMT -5 by T.J. Barber No man is an island in itself...Therefore, never send for whom the bell tolls. It tolls for the''

Tania Novice Posts: 49	Hearts can crack Feb 8, 2004 1:36:56 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Tania on Feb 8, 2004 1:36:56 GMT -5 Thank you everyone for your kindness in responding to my poem. Tania

sweetest17sin Virtuoso don't frown! you never know who's falling in love with your smile! Posts: 252	Hearts can crack Feb 15, 2004 20:26:26 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by sweetest17sin on Feb 15, 2004 20:26:26 GMT -5 hey...you write some really good poems. i really enjoy 'em. keep it up!
	somewhere there's someone who dreams of your smile and finds in your presence that life is worthwhile, so when you are lonely remember it's true; somebody, somewhere is thinking of you!

Post by Tania on Jan 22, 2004 1:34:59 GMT -5

Post by bloodredtears on Jan 22, 2004 8:56:21 GMT -5

Post by serenepoetress on Jan 22, 2004 15:39:46 GMT -5

Post by SilverEyes on Jan 22, 2004 17:34:28 GMT -5

Post by Sathien on Jan 24, 2004 14:13:50 GMT -5

Post by T.J. Barber on Feb 3, 2004 11:38:03 GMT -5

Post by Tania on Feb 8, 2004 1:36:56 GMT -5

Post by sweetest17sin on Feb 15, 2004 20:26:26 GMT -5