JC4life
Novice
Sometimes people are more than they seem. Try looking past appearance.
Posts: 49
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Post by JC4life on May 3, 2004 13:38:58 GMT -5
The fire burns as the night darkens And my very insides pour out With all the wrath and passion Of an atomic bomb With emotion reaching as far as my paper Then hastening back into the ocean Where it can roam freely And haunt whomever it pleases And make dejected the world Of aquatic plants and animals Before returning to my soul To burn like the Sahara desert Before the cool rains come And extinguish the flame.
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Post by rinna(on leave...for eternity) on May 3, 2004 19:10:39 GMT -5
JC, very vivid, nice work! x rinna x
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Post by bloodredtears on May 4, 2004 10:36:39 GMT -5
i agree...this piece is very well written...nice to see you here at Poet Club JC4life...
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Post by ::..::FoX::..:: on May 5, 2004 15:02:37 GMT -5
Yes, welcome to PC...and great write as well.
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Post by T.J. Barber on May 5, 2004 16:27:53 GMT -5
Very good job!
I'm not sure if I have welcome you or not. It's nice to have you here with us. Your a very talented poetress.
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