Horn
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Give me wings; I want to fly with someone by my side, wherever the wind takes us
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Wind
Apr 27, 2004 5:31:37 GMT -5
Post by Horn on Apr 27, 2004 5:31:37 GMT -5
Wind I am at the battlefield, The wind is screaming The corpse carpet covers the landscape Where they died for a lie, a pointless cause
The worm is eating the apple, Helping it rot away while the Foul wind rocks it off its branch
The fire is burning the house, But we are inside, trapped, While the wind spreads the deadly flames From house to house like a contagious disease
The rabbit is shot, The life is taken, The wind is blowing menacingly
The darkness is invading, People are turning out their lights, Being sucked into the night While the wind attractively blows
The bitterness of the winter wind, Piercing my mind while But in the endless power struggle, The battle is never over, the war never won
If you look straight at the tree, The wind painfully blowing away the lush green leaves, It all gives you all the memories of a lifetime And the mental anguish until you turn away You are in the middle of the storm, The tree has fallen from the power of the wind
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Apr 29, 2004 17:20:17 GMT -5
Post by angel on Apr 29, 2004 17:20:17 GMT -5
very interesting
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May 3, 2004 19:20:07 GMT -5
Post by rinna(on leave...for eternity) on May 3, 2004 19:20:07 GMT -5
horn, most definitely different from anything i've read lately, i enjoyed! x rinna x
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Horn
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Give me wings; I want to fly with someone by my side, wherever the wind takes us
Posts: 66
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Wind
May 4, 2004 12:45:11 GMT -5
Post by Horn on May 4, 2004 12:45:11 GMT -5
thx rinna
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May 6, 2004 11:30:27 GMT -5
Post by KG on May 6, 2004 11:30:27 GMT -5
Very good. We do often feel like the tree. Unable to move, unable to avoid the storm we can see coming for miles. This was a very good write.
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May 6, 2004 15:20:45 GMT -5
Post by T.J. Barber on May 6, 2004 15:20:45 GMT -5
I agree. Very nice write.....as Kemleth said..the tree is a very interesting thing to write about. It symbalizes stability and life....very well written piece.
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