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BlackRainbow
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Der Engel Schw?rzung

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The Corner Apr 19, 2004 12:46:13 GMT -5

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Post by BlackRainbow on Apr 19, 2004 12:46:13 GMT -5

Her eyes rolled back
With tassled hair
The whites of her eyes
Her feelings tare

She takes her nails
Digs into her skin
Black tears roll down
The ceiling spins

Screaming from her gut
The walls begin to shake
Holding Herself
She stays awake

She rocks back and forth
Holding her legs
She sings a song
Wearing nothing but rags

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John Barnett Founders Founder Posts: 994	The Corner Apr 19, 2004 16:43:08 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by John Barnett on Apr 19, 2004 16:43:08 GMT -5 Wow, very intense, and honest, good job!
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::..::FoX::..:: Poet Laureate Do you like my acid roc? Posts: 741	The Corner Apr 19, 2004 20:11:25 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by ::..::FoX::..:: on Apr 19, 2004 20:11:25 GMT -5 I agree, this is powerpacked.
	Scott F. Chandler Record Producer @ Acid Roc Records Recording Artist @ Acid Roc Records Perhaps next I'll be a Grammy winner!

bloodredtears Legend I don't entirely think I've had enough rum to allow that kind of talk. Posts: 1,164	The Corner Apr 20, 2004 0:21:34 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by bloodredtears on Apr 20, 2004 0:21:34 GMT -5 i love this piece...the last stanza is my favorite cuz the vulnerability really shines in that one...great job!
	Poetry copyright of Bloodredtears Summer has flown its nest, as the days swiftly turn to fall and we start to roost in the bosom of winter.

rinna(on leave...for eternity) Poet Laureate MIA Quitter surfninja Posts: 610	The Corner May 3, 2004 21:02:40 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by rinna(on leave...for eternity) on May 3, 2004 21:02:40 GMT -5 wow, really enjoyed this one! like it a lot! x rinna x
	'this life, well it's slipping right through my hands...these days turned out nothing like i had planned...'

Post by BlackRainbow on Apr 19, 2004 12:46:13 GMT -5

Post by John Barnett on Apr 19, 2004 16:43:08 GMT -5

Post by ::..::FoX::..:: on Apr 19, 2004 20:11:25 GMT -5

Post by bloodredtears on Apr 20, 2004 0:21:34 GMT -5

Post by rinna(on leave...for eternity) on May 3, 2004 21:02:40 GMT -5