Why world, why

sterling06
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Why world, why Apr 19, 2004 2:06:17 GMT -5

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Post by sterling06 on Apr 19, 2004 2:06:17 GMT -5

World, why do you treat me like im dirt.
Why am i getting packed deeper and deeper into the soil?
I want to tower above the highest tree
i want to roam to the highest cloud
I want to be free
yet you pull me down, nearer the scent of your mouth.
Let me fly over the highest peak
let me breathe your freshest air.
Why wont you let me?
What have i done?
O world, why do you treat me like dirt?

Last Edit: Apr 19, 2004 2:07:20 GMT -5 by sterling06

bloodredtears Legend I don't entirely think I've had enough rum to allow that kind of talk. Posts: 1,164	Why world, why Apr 19, 2004 3:07:13 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by bloodredtears on Apr 19, 2004 3:07:13 GMT -5 another good question you pose here...and one i've asked myself upon occasion...great job! nice to have you here at PoetClub
	Poetry copyright of Bloodredtears Summer has flown its nest, as the days swiftly turn to fall and we start to roost in the bosom of winter.

rinna(on leave...for eternity) Poet Laureate MIA Quitter surfninja Posts: 610	Why world, why May 3, 2004 21:25:49 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by rinna(on leave...for eternity) on May 3, 2004 21:25:49 GMT -5 great write. you have the ability to turn this on its head and control your destiny, however it's times and writes like these that make it interesting, welcome to PC.
	'this life, well it's slipping right through my hands...these days turned out nothing like i had planned...'

::..::FoX::..:: Poet Laureate Do you like my acid roc? Posts: 741	Why world, why May 4, 2004 18:21:01 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by ::..::FoX::..:: on May 4, 2004 18:21:01 GMT -5 Very good, sterling, nice work
	Scott F. Chandler Record Producer @ Acid Roc Records Recording Artist @ Acid Roc Records Perhaps next I'll be a Grammy winner!

Post by sterling06 on Apr 19, 2004 2:06:17 GMT -5

Post by bloodredtears on Apr 19, 2004 3:07:13 GMT -5

Post by rinna(on leave...for eternity) on May 3, 2004 21:25:49 GMT -5

Post by ::..::FoX::..:: on May 4, 2004 18:21:01 GMT -5