Avatre
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Just around for the words...^.^
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Post by Avatre on Apr 16, 2004 18:01:46 GMT -5
My Answer
My heart beats quickly; I am trapped In this cage I am kept A dangerous tiger caged and sedated The anger brings us together-those hated
I don't ask for your peace with me All I ask is for you to see Life from my view, insane as I am My mind circling-my soul damned
The sky's black velvet comes to bring me down Those who spit in my face and made me a clown The hate makes me strong and I will remember Hold to my black heart in the depths of forever
We that society caged are coming for you Our blood calls for justice; what are you to do? Nothing left on Earth, nowhere to hide You cannot escape the our same likeness inside
Open up your eyes We're almost here Open up your eyes We're getting near Open up your eyes We're here waiting...
For you to reach out hand, grasp mine And start to end this hating
A/N: ^.^ Good to be back... Anger is a powerful thing, and it takes quite a person to be willing to forgive and make peace.
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Post by John Barnett on Apr 17, 2004 15:57:55 GMT -5
Avatre, it's good to see you again, and this is a great write with such power to it. And what you said is very true, it takes a lot out of a person to forgive and make peace, it's an extremely difficult task.
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Post by bloodredtears on Apr 17, 2004 18:32:18 GMT -5
great piece...i really enjoyed reading it cuz i could feel the emotion...wonderfully done!
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