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Post by X x K e l Z x X on Apr 1, 2004 16:08:03 GMT -5
I have a nice pair of heels
And a nice set of wheels
So let me come on over to see you later
You sorry, worthless woman hater
So I can kick you where it hurts
And put you face first in the dirt
Begging mercy from me
Trying and trying to flee
But I'm holding you down with my shoe
And you stuck like glue
As I give you what you deserve
But baby, I'm not disturbed
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Post by John Barnett on Apr 1, 2004 16:35:42 GMT -5
Are you sure? No kidding, this was funny, but great at the same time, and it kind of hurts to think about it too.
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Post by bloodredtears on Apr 1, 2004 16:49:17 GMT -5
i thought this piece was pretty funny...i totally know what it's like to want to go kick the crap out of some guy...very good job with this...  |
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Post by T.J. Barber on Apr 2, 2004 17:49:47 GMT -5
Pretty good. I enjoyed reading this one.
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Post by Deleted on Apr 3, 2004 1:53:48 GMT -5
What the others have said. It's kind of funny. I liked it.
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Post by Tania on Apr 8, 2004 22:07:50 GMT -5
I really like this poem as it has vim, vigour and humour. It's defining kicking the crap out of someone that deserves with a lost of class.
Excellent work.
Tania
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Post by rinna(on leave...for eternity) on May 4, 2004 23:44:17 GMT -5
kelz, quirky, i liked it!  x rinna x |
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Post by ::..::FoX::..:: on May 7, 2004 9:52:10 GMT -5
Ouch, this is a very good poem Kelly, keep it up!
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Post by angel on May 8, 2004 20:14:19 GMT -5
I actually didn't see this funny. Maybe because I can totally relate and am in the same shoes. To be so ticked off at someone, that you just want to knock some sense into them. I really like this. Gives very nice visuals, and nice usage of words.
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