Frown

[T.J. Barber]

Standing here my back to the wall.
You look at me like you're ten feet tall.
I stare you down like the worm you are.
You say you're bad. Well that's just talk so far.

You spit in my face like some freak with a grudge.
I piss you off more when I give you a shove.
What ? You think you're so tough ? Know what ?
I think it's a bluff.

You start to swing I take a bow.
Big mistake. You're going down.
I see your girlfriend as she frowns
Your ego isn't as big as you thought.

There goes your girlfriend.
Her company I bought.
I kicked your ass and took you down.

I turned a smile from a frown.
I made her happy 'cause i'm the best.
You lay unconcious on the ground, on your chest....

Although this isn't my best piece ever. I was just venting some stupid past emotions. Anyway, that's it !!

TJ

[NeverMore]

It is odd sometimes how we ourselves can sometimes see one of our works as not our best, yet others derive a special meaning that makes it something great.

That is something someone once told me when I thought one of my works was not my best. I feel very strong that if we can say what we feel in a work and feel some kind of release with it, then it is a good write. Any emotion expressed is a good expression. Personally, I enjoyed this work for reasons I am not sure of. It just felt right.

[T.J. Barber]

I appreciate that Joe. Thank you for that....

TJ