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Post by Alex'z Death Chic on Apr 3, 2004 8:15:35 GMT -5
I loved you once and hated you for it yet now you're in my life again being the arrogant asshole you are yet you still entice my fantasies fill my ears with sweet words
the damage you've done before its still here... yet I still find being with you comforting but I don't know why...
I've loved you once and I hate you for it but now I'm falling for you again and I hate myself for it.
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Eclipse
Apprentice
It's not a matter of luck, it's just a matter of time.
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Post by Eclipse on Apr 3, 2004 8:57:05 GMT -5
i liked how the last stanza and the title tied together. i know how you feel. cool write.
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Post by bloodredtears on Apr 3, 2004 11:52:04 GMT -5
Oh my god, is this poem about my life? Seriously, i have something just like this going on, it's been going on for almost 3 years now...scary how time flies...great job!
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