The price of beauty

[Alex'z Death Chic]

hmmm... I'm so mad at myself right now.... BRACES SUCK.... IT sucks ass!!!!!! It hurts like hell too

I can feel it...
slowly squeezing my sanity
so tight, its grip's too much
I can't stand its grip on my soul

Its choking me...
robbing me of breaths
I can't speak, it has stolen my words
It has bruised my tongue

Its pushing me too hard
I don't know if I can stand it much longer
this pain... it aches too much
I need to let GO!!!

but I can't...
for this is the price I need to pay
the price I'm unwilling to pay
the price of beauty

My teeth hurt so much last night that I wrote this poem... It really hurts like hell....

[::..::FoX::..::]

Wow, this is powerfully strong and unique, I liked this a lot.

[bloodredtears]

hmm...good piece...i've never had braces, thank god cuz i play the trumpet, so i don't know what it feels like, but i kind of have a small idea now..great job!

[Seth]

I love this, lots of originality and had a realistic feel to it. Excellent write.

[rinna(on leave...for eternity)]

well this was different! i can relate to it in relationships in my life, if you hadn't mentioned the braces i think this could've applied to many situations...well done!
x rinna x
ps. hope your face is feeling better soon

[sterling06]

Amazing poem with great depth and creativity. It is amazing what you can write about. Whatever is in your mind or in your view can turn out to be an inspiring all out poem that catches peoples attention, as this poem did for me. It was a great write about the price of beauty. Hope to read more.