F**k Break-ups

[Seth]

It never hurts to tell the truth,
Then let me say to you;

That words can't break my bones,
As easily as stones
But my heart is so fragile,
That after a short while
When you said you hate me
My dying started slowly
And when you said I was pathetic
I looked for the anesthetic
Words like stupid and ashamed
Slowly I'm dying, and I have you to blame.

And yes, maybe I am all of those things
Maybe I shouldn't go on living,
But you aren't so perfect yourself,
The person of innocence isn't your true self.
You are flawed like I am
And you too are crazy and damned.
And you think that you can read me so easily
That I'll wait here for you to come back to me
How dare you even consider that I'll be here
To whisper your name and to tear
You want to leave for some other girl
Go ahead, it isn't the end of the world.

And as you leave in your hot corvette
Don't bother coming back, you d*ck.

[T.J. Barber]

Interesting peice. I can feel some personal emotions coming from this one. Perhaps some personal experience of some sort? Anyways, Great Job, TJ

[John Barnett]

Wow, this was very powerful and I can so relate to much of this. Break-ups are hellacious and they destroy you to the core, this poem was so emotionally power-packed, it really touched me. Wonderful job!

[amberputis]

And as you leave in your hot corvette
Don't bother coming back, you d*ck.

haha this line is great! I love the fact that your able to cope with some things instead of living in the past, and hoping for a miracle, i wish i was more like that!
fabulous job!!!

[Eclipse]

lmao!! the last line is perfection! awesome write.

[rinna(on leave...for eternity)]

this was excellent!!!!!!!! I LOVED IT!!!!!!!!
x rinna x