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DEEPER
Mar 3, 2004 9:06:09 GMT -5
Post by Alex'z Death Chic on Mar 3, 2004 9:06:09 GMT -5
Rip my facade into shreds
dig into my skin
deeper! deeper!
can't you hear me screaming at you?!
DEEPER! DEEPER!
expose me for everyone to see
strip me naked in front of the whole f*cking world!
isn't that what you want?
DEEPER! DAMN IT! DIG DEEPER!!!
cut my mask with a knife
slice it into so many little pieces
until the wind blows it away
hmm... not really a very angry poem but its something I thought of when I was writing that poem in the "who are you" board. |
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DEEPER
Mar 3, 2004 18:59:29 GMT -5
Post by bloodredtears on Mar 3, 2004 18:59:29 GMT -5
actually...i really like that poem..i feel like that sometimes...especially with certain people, whom i will not discuss...but anyway...great job! i can feel the anger anyway!  |
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Seth
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DEEPER
Mar 11, 2004 14:42:05 GMT -5
Post by Seth on Mar 11, 2004 14:42:05 GMT -5
Yeah, I can too... I guess it's just the way you read this, because I can feel your anger perfectly.
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DEEPER
May 3, 2004 20:02:26 GMT -5
Post by rinna(on leave...for eternity) on May 3, 2004 20:02:26 GMT -5
adc,
excellent work, this is oozing rage.
x rinna x
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