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Post by bloodredtears on Mar 1, 2004 1:34:34 GMT -5
Taking over, a corrupted power-trip the only expression you can have is mine and don't you dare think about crossing me
This is not a freaking dictatorship.. who made you the f*ing king? Why do you have to be like that why can't you just act your age!
Heil Hitler, no one can think for themselves if I hear one whine out of you I'll shut you up and if you even think bad, I'll blow your brains out
Come on, what kind of world are we living in? What does ones expression have to do with anything everyone is entitled to their own opinion let them f*ing have it already
Communism is the name of the game I will tell you how to live and you'll just nod I will hand out everything you need, just trust me
There are not dictatorships here no one has to bow down to another and if you don't like someones opinion don't f*ing read it, got it??
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Post by Celestial on Mar 1, 2004 11:02:37 GMT -5
Down with dictatorship, yes. I enjoyed reading this and I think I got a lot out of it. Just by the meaning of it and I really understood what you were saying (go Western Civilization class! hehe) Really nice poem, I enjoyed reading it!
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Post by kemleth on Mar 1, 2004 17:38:16 GMT -5
See I told you it was good,
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Post by SilverEyes on Mar 1, 2004 18:16:14 GMT -5
I definitely see what you're saying on a larger scale but I also see it in a smaller version: catholic school. It's pretty bad where I go and some teachers won't even let you wear socks with one thin colored strip at the top. Anyway, nice write.
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Post by T.J. Barber on Mar 1, 2004 18:24:30 GMT -5
Ok Kris...calm down.....Good job..great poem...interesting is all I can say..Not much personal experience on my part but clearly this is a subject touched by your heart
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Post by bloodredtears on Mar 1, 2004 23:23:24 GMT -5
thanks everyone...and the calming down isn't neccessary.....i'm always calm when i'm writing...actually, writing calms me down...whatever...thanks for the replies
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Post by Celestial on Mar 2, 2004 19:17:12 GMT -5
Welcome!
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Post by ::..::FoX::..:: on Mar 16, 2004 14:17:26 GMT -5
Very strong words, tense, powerful, great work.
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Post by Seth on Mar 24, 2004 13:04:40 GMT -5
Truly an intense piece. I'm familiar with the content and your descriptions here, it really bites. Well, great write, as always.
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