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Post by kemleth on Feb 29, 2004 3:37:12 GMT -5
Stifle and censor abhore and misunderstand filthy and arcane all passed down by the weaker hand
divide and purge deny self and deny the living gather to scourge Oh! So white and unforgiving
False power and a lie to guide visions of a bitter life can't speak cause you don't know how what you gonna do now?
I am the breeze you wish you felt I am the sun that never shines I am the quicksand beneath your feet I am the clouds in the sky
You can shut your eyes, but you'll always hear me Never sugar-coated and your fearing me
sufferance for your people erosion at the foundation and where oh so hetero lead biased analyzation in a world of pridefull ego
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Post by bloodredtears on Feb 29, 2004 4:21:34 GMT -5
alright, i'm not quite sure what the meaning behind this poem is...it actually kind of confused me, but since it's 3:15 am that can be attributed to lack of sleep....i did like how well the whole thing flowed together though...
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Post by SilverEyes on Feb 29, 2004 11:38:18 GMT -5
I couldn't help but think propaganda when reading this. I don't why. Interesting write.
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Post by Celestial on Feb 29, 2004 13:57:11 GMT -5
Oddly enough SilverEyes is who I'd have to agree with. Propaganda comes to mind. LIke how they are closing off people to the breezes they wish they felt, the sun they wish would shine, the ground they wish was solid and the sky they wish were clear. That's the meaning I get out of it. Nice write
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Post by ::..::FoX::..:: on Mar 23, 2004 14:05:57 GMT -5
This was very good, keep up the good work!
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Post by Seth on Mar 24, 2004 13:27:49 GMT -5
I am the quicksan beneath your feet
A very profound and deep poem. Mindblowing and brethtaking with an excellent flow and beautiful wording. Loved everything about this piece.
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Post by rinna(on leave...for eternity) on May 9, 2004 2:09:54 GMT -5
this was a great example of pure anger. i really enjoyed, thanks for sharing this! x rinna x
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