Rivalry

Celestial
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Rivalry Feb 28, 2004 16:23:48 GMT -5

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Post by Celestial on Feb 28, 2004 16:23:48 GMT -5

I actually had no one in particular in my mind when I wrote this but it is often how I feel towards challenges between me and someone else.

Bring it
I know you want to
Fight until only one stands...
Only one can win
Only one can make it to the top

You aren't going to push me around
Not anymore
No, it's time for me to be happy
I'm not going to listen
To your insults
To your words
To your voice

Bring it
Because I know you want to
Start something, go on, you know you want to
I know you can
But I'll win this time
It's time for me to be happy

Screw you, you're done
No more will I listen
No more will I hurt
Bring it on...

~ Rivalry ~
By CAB 2004

Yeah, it's a bomb.
Yes, it's lit.
Yes, you better run for your life.
:: insert evil laughter here ::

richie Virtuoso Posts: 302	Rivalry Feb 28, 2004 16:43:19 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by richie on Feb 28, 2004 16:43:19 GMT -5 intresting wording, Celestial can you reply to a few poems, welcome to our family of poet's take care Richie.
	from childhood's hour I have not been as others were-I have not seen as others saw-I could not bring my passions from a common spring from the same sourse I have not taken my sorrow: I could not awaken my heart to joy at the same tone and all I loved I loved alone.

SilverEyes Poet Laureate Silver eyes crying crimson tears. Posts: 609	Rivalry Feb 28, 2004 17:22:13 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by SilverEyes on Feb 28, 2004 17:22:13 GMT -5 I like. It makes me feel adversarial. Heh
	You know I'm dying to live Until I'm ready I'm ready to die ~Jonny Lang~

bloodredtears Legend I don't entirely think I've had enough rum to allow that kind of talk. Posts: 1,164	Rivalry Feb 29, 2004 13:46:10 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by bloodredtears on Feb 29, 2004 13:46:10 GMT -5 wonderful piece you have here celestial...i can very much relate to this one! great expression!
	Poetry copyright of Bloodredtears Summer has flown its nest, as the days swiftly turn to fall and we start to roost in the bosom of winter.

::..::FoX::..:: Poet Laureate Do you like my acid roc? Posts: 741	Rivalry Mar 23, 2004 14:07:27 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by ::..::FoX::..:: on Mar 23, 2004 14:07:27 GMT -5 Nice piece, very well done job here Celestial
	Scott F. Chandler Record Producer @ Acid Roc Records Recording Artist @ Acid Roc Records Perhaps next I'll be a Grammy winner!

Seth Virtuoso Root Beer Float Play something country! Posts: 411	Rivalry Mar 24, 2004 13:23:18 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Seth on Mar 24, 2004 13:23:18 GMT -5 This one really gets my blood pumping... Excellent write, Celestial.
	"I see the eternal misery. I feel the caress of beauty around me. I dream of the colors in your crystalized fantasy... Hoping one day, I'll be swept away from reality...

Celestial Novice Celestial.Photographer.Poet. Posts: 72	Rivalry Apr 3, 2004 11:51:45 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Celestial on Apr 3, 2004 11:51:45 GMT -5
	Yeah, it's a bomb. Yes, it's lit. Yes, you better run for your life. :: insert evil laughter here ::

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Rivalry Apr 8, 2004 22:17:44 GMT -5

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Post by Tania on Apr 8, 2004 22:17:44 GMT -5

I like this poem cause to me it taking charge against a bully. I really like this poem and it to me "kicks butt'.
I like this stanza the best:
"You aren't going to push me around
Not anymore
No, it's time for me to be happy
I'm not going to listen
To your insults
To your words
To your voice"
Excellent enpowering poem!
Tania

Post by Celestial on Feb 28, 2004 16:23:48 GMT -5

Post by richie on Feb 28, 2004 16:43:19 GMT -5

Post by SilverEyes on Feb 28, 2004 17:22:13 GMT -5

Post by bloodredtears on Feb 29, 2004 13:46:10 GMT -5

Post by ::..::FoX::..:: on Mar 23, 2004 14:07:27 GMT -5

Post by Seth on Mar 24, 2004 13:23:18 GMT -5

Post by Celestial on Apr 3, 2004 11:51:45 GMT -5

Post by Tania on Apr 8, 2004 22:17:44 GMT -5