The World is my Toy

Seth Virtuoso Root Beer Float Play something country! Posts: 411	The World is my Toy Mar 24, 2004 12:56:53 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Seth on Mar 24, 2004 12:56:53 GMT -5 Such a cool and very real piece. Wonderfully done- the rhymes were a great touch and I can relate to this poem a lot. Wonderful write!
	"I see the eternal misery. I feel the caress of beauty around me. I dream of the colors in your crystalized fantasy... Hoping one day, I'll be swept away from reality...

rinna(on leave...for eternity) Poet Laureate MIA Quitter surfninja Posts: 610	The World is my Toy May 6, 2004 18:24:24 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by rinna(on leave...for eternity) on May 6, 2004 18:24:24 GMT -5 i really enjoyed this, it was a fun read for me. x rinna x
	'this life, well it's slipping right through my hands...these days turned out nothing like i had planned...'