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[Angel Of Music]

No, perhaps it does not make sense
Why He was killed
And I remain
Whithering away into dust
A whisper
A mere shadow
Unwelcome in your home
For it was He you loved
While I dreamt of someone to embrace me.

Why then, do I linger?
I cannot stand in His stead
You will never see me as you did He
In your mind I am already dead
And I never lived.

In my mind I am free
And I dirty your hallways no more
With each passing day,
I stay in my dreamworld longer
Soon I shan't return at all
And you will never notice I am gone.


hey guys...i need help with the title...i want to call it Last something...but i can't find the right word. can u help?

[Seth]

Last Recollection
Last Shadow of Reality


Lol, I suck at titles, but this is a deep, intriguing write. I love the scene the wording and emotion create.

[kalotaable]

I have a title hope such a master of poetry likes it "Bleeding soul"