Death took her

[alostandbrokensoul]

This is a poem by a writer on Quizilla, its awesome so i thought i would post it with her permision of course so this is by EntwinedDarkness on quizilla.

"Guys point of view"

A shroud of raven hair hid her midnight eyes that were dull and void.
It was like a silent movie as her lips moved engraving the last of her words into my heart.
She finally stopped and looked at me with...with eyes full or sorrow and pain.
With her final pause she pulled the trigger and landed in a pool of her own blood.
I could taste the splattered blood on my lips and saw crimson tears falling from her eyes.
Kneeling down I took her hand in mine and felt the warmth leave her.
Never will I have the smell of her hair, the feel of her skin, the taste of her lips.
I stayed kneeling like that until the police found us. Me.
One thing I learned from losing true love...was that death is final.
Before they pulled me from where I knelt I kissed her one final time covering my lips with her blood.
From that day on sometimes I think...that she didnt die... I did.

[Seth]

This is really cool, you can tell her I said that.
Very powerful and gripping. The emotion comes off so powerful and deep, the wording really brings out such clear crystal images...
Love the ending line, just awesome.

[X x K e l Z x X]

Cool and yeah the last line is the best

[robot08]

that's an awesome poem.