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Post by alostandbrokensoul on Feb 8, 2005 15:11:22 GMT -5
I'm walking in the graveyard the wind blowing in my hair the winter chill surrounds me the coldness I cant bare.
The moonlight shines down on me a pathway to his grave the headstone of a boy that none of us could save.
The earth is bare and broken the grass is all but green a dozen dead roses on his grave is seen.
Sitting by the headstone underneath the tree I start to cry for the boy that had to leave me.
He was just so happy he always healed my pain though we were so different inside were all the same.
the snow begins to fall covering the ground I was his little princess now i sit with a broken crown.
I just dont understand it why he had to die he was such a great brother who lived a wonderfu life.
He was hit by a driver who had to much to drink so now my brother's dead becasue a man forgot to think.
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Post by X x K e l Z x X on Feb 10, 2005 20:13:47 GMT -5
Great write, keep it up
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Post by Seth on Mar 13, 2005 22:35:16 GMT -5
Powerful write. Many can find relation to this. Whether through the victim's side, or the guilty party... The ending definately leaves a heavy impact, as does the tone consume and engross the reader. Wonderful write.
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