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Post by Angel Of Music on Jan 31, 2005 18:18:05 GMT -5
Your eyes
So green, yet they see nothing
Moist with tears of red
Your voice
So tender, calling her name
Now dry from being open
Your hands
So gentle, all over her body
Now they are still
Your love
So pure, but now tainted
Poisoned by her
Farewell
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Post by Outcast on Feb 3, 2005 3:15:52 GMT -5
awsom pome could be longer but good
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Post by X x K e l Z x X on Feb 10, 2005 20:13:10 GMT -5
This is gr8
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Seth
Virtuoso
Root Beer Float
Play something country!
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Post by Seth on Feb 28, 2005 2:05:02 GMT -5
Intriguing and yet vague in a cool, nifty kinda way. Leaves the reader to conjure up some interesting and graphic images (at least me) though it would've been cool to have more added to this, it's wonderfully written and very endearing.
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calamityroo
Novice
Hello again, my dear old friend, why do you leave so often now?
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Post by calamityroo on Feb 28, 2005 17:43:50 GMT -5
Awesome write! Made me think of things that have happened and how much I want someone to go away... Anyways, great write! ;D
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