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Post by alostandbrokensoul on Dec 5, 2004 18:40:51 GMT -5
She wears a smile on her face when deep inside she cries she knows she is a family disgrace with all the corruption in her lies. She cuts her wrists to feel the pain inside adding another cut to her lists but this time she ends her life.  |
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Wickedblades666
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I Hate Life, but i am stuck in it by my own rules: death is for quitters, i dont quit...
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Post by Wickedblades666 on Dec 6, 2004 17:27:59 GMT -5
i have to say it was good, i liked the part about she smiles and is crying on the inside, have you ever tried to spot people around you that are doing that? great fun, and a bit tricky...and i love the picture
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Post by X x K e l Z x X on Dec 7, 2004 19:49:36 GMT -5
Yes, this does evoke a great picture, very well done.
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Post by rinna(on leave...for eternity) on Dec 12, 2004 8:09:17 GMT -5
ALABS, great work. I have to say that the picture really added to the visual I'd conjured in my head. I am a fan of brusque work, and you haven't failed to deliver the punch. Hurrah!
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