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Post by Broken hope on Nov 26, 2004 21:38:48 GMT -5
This bullet is tragedys last kiss. Tonight its set to mark and will not miss. Remembering the nights they spent talking. He invisions you getting out of the car and walking. He understand that this is all he'll ever have. What a waste that i've taken all i can. Tonights a night to come to terms. Re-evaluate the lessons you've already learned. What's important and what will kill you? How many times have you falsely said i love you. Some questions are better left off without answers. When most answers eat away at you like cancer. Better off left to dream their life away. Then to find the fight another useless reason to stay. Without a heart, he's played his last game. Don't you understand that he couldn't refrain? He needed his one last spin before he died. With everything on the line this was the last time he'll cry. Forgive him for his mistakes, he never ment to hurt you. Forgive him and forget him, he knows he won't do. The end will creep closer to his cold lips. Tonight death is the only thing to kiss. Goodnight my world, my hell, my bliss.
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Post by ::..::FoX::..:: on Nov 29, 2004 13:15:38 GMT -5
This is excellently awesome, if that makes sense, great work.
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Post by beginswithKendsinG on Nov 29, 2004 17:05:31 GMT -5
"Take your death, multiply the sex, add up the violance and what do you get?"
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Post by Seth on Dec 2, 2004 13:01:49 GMT -5
Breathtakingly awesome. This just really captures my attention and just, it took my breath away. Beautiful, gorgeous flow and wording, just powerful and intense. I love the ending, but yet, love it all in its entirety.
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