poem about that girl again

[GPRacer]

About this I can’t lie
every time I see her pass by
I can’t let the chance fly
I gotta talk to her
Attempt to make her happy
See that beautiful smile
When I go home I just have to dial
try to call her everyday
Gotta talk to her some kinda way
I love when I see her
I love when I hear her
I love when I touch her
I love when I talk to her
I love bein with her
This girl I’m talkin about I’m sure you all know
She’s neither enemy nor foe
Heard the other rappers?
Ya she’s no ho
Hasn’t been used
Sometimes easily amused
Someone I wanna spend the rest of my life with
Hopefully she don’t hookup with mr smith
This love seems some kinda myth
It’s gotta be true
Seem real to you?
If not
Isn’t your fault
To me it’s all too real
This deep thing I feel
Tryin to keep it cool
When I see her at school
every time I see her pass by
Can’t let the chance fly by
with this I tell no lie
Neither can any deny
I wanna feel her energy
Not be with the enemy
I see her everyday
With her I just wanna stay
Can’t stand to let her go
Someday I’ll know.

[bloodredtears]

ok...someday you'll know what....i really liked this poem, but then ending kind of leaves you hanging with no idea where to go...other than that it's wonderful...

[GPRacer]

bloodredtears said:

ok...someday you'll know what....i really liked this poem, but then ending kind of leaves you hanging with no idea where to go...other than that it's wonderful...

thanks for the comment! I guess it kind of ended that way, in the way that it was "left hanging" as that's where i was at with this girl.

i think i finally found something i'm good at though