Tragic love

[Broken hope]

He lies in bed smoking his life away
Lying to himself saying he asked her to stay
While in his heart he knows none of it true
he lies to himself to make it through

As he slips into his fantasy
He wonders what tomorrow will bring
It could be wonderful the best day he'll ever see
It could be hell or bring anything

He wakes to drink his day away
His friends always seem make him stay
Remembering what she said to him
He thinks to go for one last spin

The rose on the dash to say i love you
Is only the reminder of a better time
When the three words i said were always true
And when i heard your voice i felt sublime

Now that rose lies in glass
Shattered windows and a car turning to ash
He knows that his life is almost ending
And he wishes that his heart wasn't still mending

[::..::FoX::..::]

Nice imagery, gr8 work altogether

[Seth]

Ooh, this is just so awesome,
and deeply captivating-
your words flow so nicely and intrigue
the mind, truly.
Profound write, the emotion and visuals
illuminating and beating off each line,
are wonderfully felt.